Wednesday, 20 December 2006

LOVE ME!!!

When I pretend to be dead it makes her laugh

I talked about boarding school boys

Sticking their willys into test tubes

For kicks

And I make her

Heart beat out of her chest

8 comments:

  1. Some girls are easy to impress, no?

    Hey, look at me! I can do this! I can stand on one leg and touch my nose. Look at me!

    You're not lookin'!

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  2. When I wonder who she is I think, 'lucky girl'...

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  3. Isn't poetry out of character for you? Usually you would just use prose.

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  4. Jews for Jesus don't think that's funny.

    yeharr

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  5. ;o) So...is there hope? Do I detect a note of it?

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  6. Just stopped by on a whim and for some reason I like this poem. I will spend the better part of the evening trying to puzzle out why.

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